I Need Your Help Guys

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I have been working on a poem for a gift for my partner and I need your opinion before I give it to them so I don't make a fool of myself. I've had the first line stuck in my head for ages and it's been wrecking my head for ages. So please give me your honest opinion. And I'm sorry that this isn't Lizzie/Wanda related.

Summer Rain

Being with you is like breathing in Summer rain
Every moment spent I fall deeper
Gazing in your eyes I know I'm home
Safe in your embrace
Everytime you look at me
With such intensity
You set my heart on fire
With just one look
I know I'm yours for all eternity


Please let me know what you think. Its been a while since I've written poems and I just need your opinion.
I love you amazing people ❤ ♥

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